• Story: Porcelain Secrets

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    [Normal] (Nathan !!eFuOgyMIEPo) over at /co/ finished his Porcelain Secrets Fanfic.  Nothing gross here!  Check it out if you are into Applebloom or Spike!


    Porcelain Secrets Part 1
    Porcelain Secrets Part 2
    Porcelain Secrets Part 3
    Wednesday, January 19, 2011 op
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    22 comments:

    1. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2011 at 2:54 AM

      go on...

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    2. Nathan ShepardJanuary 21, 2011 at 1:34 PM

      Nathan here. Pointing out that the fanfic is not yet finished. Last part due by latter tonight if not earlier.

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    3. SethistoJanuary 22, 2011 at 2:48 PM

      fix'd

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    4. madmaxFebruary 1, 2011 at 7:33 AM

      reading.....reading...
      that is supes man!

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    5. PacceFebruary 2, 2011 at 1:17 PM

      And once again, the day is saved, thanks to FRIENDSHIP!

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    6. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 9:50 PM

      One of my favorite pieces of Pony-fiction. Mostly for Spike/Bloom.

      Great job.

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    7. Cereal VelocityFebruary 8, 2011 at 10:17 AM

      Finally got around to reading this. Well done! You nailed Apple Bloom's accent pretty well, and that last line was cute. If I had to pick something to critique, I'd say that sometimes you switched to different locations in the story without a whole lot of padding or explanation. It was a little jarring, but nothing that broke the narrative.

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    8. SqueakFebruary 16, 2011 at 4:06 PM

      Aww, I finally got around to this, and I loved it! There is not enough Spike/Apple Bloom in the world. I think you pulled off the dialog perfectly, and as Cereal said the last line mad me D'awwww hard. Great stuff, in character as always!

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    9. Darkhawk1February 27, 2011 at 12:44 AM

      Great. I got type two diabetes from looking at the page picture. Thanks, jerk!

      Oh, who am I kidding, I can't stay mad looking at that. D'awwwwwwwwwwww...

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    10. ZarkanorfMarch 6, 2011 at 5:48 PM

      THE FIRST PONYFICTION EVER PUBLISHED ON EQUESTRIA DAILY! *ooooo's, aaaaaahh's, and UUUUUUUU's)

      Now the low amount of grammatical and spelling errors, the accurate characterization of the... character, and the overall look of the story really makes Porcelain Secrets a "standard" on what writers should aim for. I'm not saying "rite spike/bloom an'd u b gud" (although some more from this pairing would be adorable), but the way this story is structured just...

      Fuck explaining; to me, this story is the bar that you either get a 4 or a 3 from me (note the grammatical/spelling errors this story has; if you really looked, you might've found maybe two of them). I love this story.

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    11. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 12:49 AM

      Wow, this was amazing! It almost feels like a real episode.

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    12. CosmonautMarch 27, 2011 at 10:43 PM

      What a cute story! 5 stars!

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    13. AnonymousApril 8, 2011 at 7:21 PM

      My eyes almost blged out of my head when Applejack mentioned getting a "switch" for Apple Bloom. That honestly doesn't seem like something that would go down in Ponyville...

      Other than that, though, an excellent story :)

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    14. supervanman64May 4, 2011 at 11:49 AM

      I don't know why, but I've always loved this pairing. And this is a great story. :3

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    15. ZarkanorfJune 10, 2011 at 9:47 PM

      test

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    16. ItsTheWhinyGuysJuly 18, 2011 at 11:53 PM

      This was all perfectly in character, and the end was d'awww. Very nice read!

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    17. TaylorJuly 24, 2011 at 11:42 PM

      This is an awesome fan fic. I was wondering where the comic I found about this came from. Good to see the whole story was just as cute as it was!

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    18. UmandsfAugust 12, 2011 at 8:00 PM

      I know this is very off-topic, but I feel I have to say this? Is it just me or have I seen this exact same artwork way before the onset of these particular ponies?

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    19. DarthVaderSeptember 19, 2011 at 11:18 AM

      Wow. EqD's first Fan Fic. Very adorable.

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    20. von BoomslangOctober 5, 2011 at 7:09 PM

      Loved it. Also, *pout* want more.

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    21. AnonymousJuly 9, 2012 at 8:56 AM

      DYK: This appears to be the first story on EQD.

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    22. UnknownAugust 9, 2012 at 9:21 AM

      Wow this is old they talking about /co/

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